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Sutter- student prompt

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writing center reflection

           Last week i went to the writing center. My writing fellow was John Harris. He is a senior. If any of y'all know John Harris, then you know that he is a jokester. Although John jokes, he did help me with my paper.

            I went into the writing center with a completed outline, nothing else. At first John didn't help. Twenty minutes into the visit i started to get somewhere. I had three lines written and they were pretty solid. Overall the visit helped me develop my paper.

character

           My characters name is Cosnester Smiff. He has an afro. He likes Soccer and Football. He is 4'3' and is from Florida. One day Cosnester decided to change his name.
           Cosnester went to the name changing office. He had the name he wanted in mind. Before he walked in, he got hit by a bus. He got up and continued walking  in. He then changed his name to EcsQuisitine Bubléshislow.

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literary analysis

          As we all know, Writing this literary analysis has been pretty difficult. It has been for me anyway. Writing this has made me become a better writer. I have learned many things from this experience, so far. I have also struggled with many things.
          one of those things was the introduction. i had trouble making a good first sentence that draws the reader in. I do feel like my thesis is pretty good though. Another thing was the conclusion. i had trouble linking all of the information together and summarizing.

fruit cake

           Whether it is ten seconds old or ten years old, fruitcake always tastes like garbage with sugar on top. On the other hand many people buy canned foods in case of an emergency such as a nuclear fallout and what not. Why people do this i don't know, because they can buy twice as many fruitcakes as they can cans of food that last ten years. Fruitcakes last FOREVER.
           It may not taste like fruit or cake, but for some reason people think they would make great gifts. "Hey there's the worst tasting thing on the planet, I'm going to buy that for somebody i care about." my family get like three fruitcakes every year. Before that gift is handed off to anybody in my family, its already in the trash. No one eats it, no one likes it, it is indestructable and it doesn't go bad it starts out bad. FRUITCAKE.