drip drop went the rain
as the slippery spider silk
gathered beads
the spider,
frozen in time,
dangled from a single thread
hoping he wouldn't end up dead
the rain ceased
spider in one
mended its web in the sun
Consonance
Sibilance
Hyperbole
I like how you made your poem about the weather and especially rain. My favorite line is "as the slippery spider silk gathered beads" because it is really cool to see the water bathe like beads on the spider web. Great overall post, keep it up.
ReplyDeleteThis was a really good post. My favorite line was drip drop went the rain. That sounds like a great way to start off the poem.
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