"bye kathy, your in charge, see you later tonight."
"bye mom"
I sat down at the kitchen table to do my homework. I opened my backpack and pulled out my math binder and my pencil with a feather hanging off the end. I tore through the math problems as if they were steaks and I was a hungry dog. Then I heard the front door open. Then close. I could not see the door due to a wall, blocking the dining room from the front entrance way and the stairs. I froze terror. unable to move I just listened. Heavy footsteps, not like my mothers, slowly creeped past the entrance area. They to my relief turned and bumped their way up the stairs. Minutes went by. I heard the heavy steps come back down the stairs and go out the door. I then remembered that my baby sister was taking a nap upstairs.
This was a good short story. I didn't see the ending coming and the rest was super suspenseful.
ReplyDeleteVery suspenseful and epic atmosphere, wish you could focus more on spelling, capitalization, and punctuation. Other than that, awesome story!
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